Gud, a bit harsh on the ears, but may just be my volume settings. I would still smooth out the transitions a TINY bit. They seem a bit too abrupt. Good job, using it for a GD level!
Thoughts while listening:
Simple but cute melody to start off...love the saws coming through. I kinda want the synth to sound more natural. I know this is a video game site, but for some reason I figure that a synth should only be used if it sounds better than the real thing. Just my own personal thing. Love the quiet section at 2:10. Good dirty bassline going. You've got some great effects going there. I've gotta figure out how to mess with my tones like that...I mostly do it by playing the tone through the instrument. Using an effect for it would be useful to me.
Thoughts after listening:
Good stuff -
Nice, solid melody. It's got a hook you can hum, which so many people forget about in their music. Great FX. Like, seriously solid FX. Don't think I could do this to save my life. No complaints on the mix/master.
Could improve -
My own personal preference is obviously for more live-sounding instrumentation. I think that some of the sounds you've used here, especially for the lead, sound really dated, like NES sounds. Some may love that sound, but again, I'm more for live.
Overall: Solid remix here. Nothing stands out as a mistake, and the hook be strong.
Overall, this was done pretty well! One thing that study out to me was the transition into 1:45 and then that section right after it. The "claps" could be cleaned up a little in that section, it would just take a little more fine tuning. Honestly everything else felt in place and good besides a couple small trouble spots. Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.