So this one was notbad at all some good sounds you bring out on this one but seems like it's missing something maybe some extra instraments there just needs some more depth more unique sounds and more that makes this different from the rest but I do like what you have here just needs a little extra on the sounds and maybe instruments so keep up the great track
At times it sounds more like house than trance - gets a bit monotone and bassy, but overall I do like it. It's smooth, melodic, varied... there's nothing wrong with the beat itself, yet it has a bit of a 'flat' sound to it. Not sure if it's the instruments, or a lack of layers, or what exactly could help bring it to the next level, but feels like there's still some polishing to be done to bring out the sound in this as much as possible! Nice work so far.
It takes a while for the riff to kick in - try to make it so that something different happens every 8 bars. It's a good start - but it's not finished yet.
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