Don't take this as me simply hating on your song.
But that first hi-hat open was a really hard thing to ignore.
The problem with it is the fact that you weren't really building up to anything and so it did reduce the impact of when your actual build-up and drop came about.
As for the overall soundscape it's fine.
I like the fact you used a brass instrument for it but the mixing is barely noticeable so it feels so artificial.
Besides that, this is a house song that I don't hate. So good job on it I guess?
Thanks for this comment. I will try to improve it in my next tracks:)
AWESOME! JUST PERFECT! I Just wish i could download
Thank you:) You can download it here: https://soundcloud.com/uc4z/lucaz-elephant
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.