I'm 100% up for brutal, honest and helpful critiques! :)
Not sure what you can use it for, but let me know if you're interested and what you think. I haven't ever made something like this before (I usually write rock music with guitars and stuff), but I loved making it, so I'll do more. I honestly don't even know what genre this would be classified under because I don't listen to any electronic music!
I'd like to re-arrange this, make the intro shorter and get to the fast bit more quickly as well as mix it slightly differently and cut out some of the low-mids for the bass. Sadly, I made this on Pro Tools at school, which is closed for the year so I can't really edit it til February 2017!
This was your first upload and first attempt at something electronic? Were you just born talented? lol
Definitely doesn't sound like your first time, everything sounds so tight. I love your melodies here too, especially at what sounds like the chorus. I really enjoy how this track progresses too. Your mixing seems to have definitely improved in 2017, but it's still really nice here! I feel that maybe you could add a few vocals and it'd sound perfect!
Lol, thank you. I don't think I was born talented, but I had written a lot of music before this, so I guess I watched a bunch of Youtube tutorials and applied what I already knew to this new style of music. But yeah, it was my first time using MIDI and Massive and that sort of thing! I also feel like my mixing has improved, which I'm happy about, but yeah maybe some vocals on top of this would sound pretty decent? :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
McGorilla42 
