Spacing, you have a problem with spacing. After each bar you seem to leave an empty room there with nothing but the drumline.
And without a strong melody or harmonies to really create a tension-resolve in the song. It isn't at all that memorable.
The bells were a nice touch but overall you still need to improve.
The drum part I intentionally put there, but I can understand if you dont like it.
This was from an old track that I started when I first started using musescore, so I didnt really know any good ways to improvise on this.
The track actually started with the bells but I didnt like how they started out with the song so I added some old piano pieces from that song I had on musescore.
Well done man! I really like it ;D