ITS TRUE MAN THAT I FEEL LIKE IT!!!
You submitted your new song right as I was reviewing your original one. Well, I guess I have to review this one now, huh? XD
It seems you've changed your percussion in the beginning. You've added another harmony, too - it's nothing short of perfect as far as what I'd ask for.
You have that same, awesome melody there. Sweetness. I love it. =D Ooh, and you've added to it! I think I liked it without that extra bit, but it's still really, really good.
Sheer awesomeness, I tell you. You've done a great job with this song. (The one flaw, I think, is the part where you take out all but the drums, add the harmonies one by one, and then add the melody. But it's still a great song.)
I have nothing to suggest, save try remaking it when you're a lot better at this - if it's this good now, imagine it then! =D
I want to remix it even more now. XD
Yeah...It was kind of weird...I sent my first version in and thought...well that one sucked. =D So I was going to wait a little bit but thought AH why not submit this one now.
Yeah sure you can definately remix this...I love the chord progressions XD
Let me know when you're done I'm looking forward to hearing it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.