Awesome!!! :)

Excellent sense of space in your mix, and quite cohesive overall. Love your choice of sounds used, the percussion especially just sits right for me. Something I would suggest is to get a little more creative and in depth on your transitions! A lot of them somewhat fell flat like the sudden jump to loud again around 2:49. Something like a gong or cymbal, or even a little filtered white noise sweep usually adds a lot of flavour to stuff like that I have found. But good stuff, and some nicely written parts in here as well!

Wow! This is great! It has great equalization instrument's and special FX! Well done...