I'm not too great at judging this genre, but I'll try to be as specific as possible.
The melody is quite repetitive and doesn't let up it feels like a loop. Doesn't sound too bad though.
The sound that comes in at 0:19 gets a bit annoying after awhile and it doesn't blend. However it's fade away makes it a little less outlandish.
Also the noise at 1:00 to 1:03 feels off beat, I noticed it too much to let it go.
I like the vibes this song gives overall, something to use in menu music or a cave game.
Thanks for your detailed review