Ohh, very nice! I imagined walking through a forest during the fall where the tree's leaves are red orange and yellow. After realizing I need to get to my destination a bit faster, I decide to take a shortcut!
Though I was expecting this song to be upbeat and melodic, instead of a familiar house tune. It's still good but I think it could have been so much more… here are my main nitpicks.
It starts off very well…
0:15 is a great way to escalate that…
The "drop" kicks in at 0:29, I think it could have been much better without the voice, it's kinda annoying.
Removing the voice still wouldn't fix it though, because it's still a generic house beat with or without it.
LOVE the marching beat at 0:45. See? You ARE capable of making unique things! It's a very nice part, though the claps should sound different. They sound a bit… "wet and muddy", I'm not sure how to describe it.
The buildup at 1:00 is, well. Alright. But the humming noise sounds like something that's a bit high-tech when the song has already had a nature-ish theme to it since the beginning. It just seems kind of random and out of nowhere to me.
1:22 is something I already talked about…
I DO like how you ended the song.
Well, that's my advice for ya. Don't be afraid to step out of your comfort zone and try new and unique things. Stay away from the generic beats that people have heard hundreds of times already.
You have lots of potential, and I look forward to your future releases. :D
WOW, that's one detailed review, thank you so much!
I'm going to quickly reply to your review since you toook so much time to write that i'd imagine.
0:29 - VOX part, It might seem annoying, but a few replays of the song will make you instantly reallize, without that vox the song wouldn't be just good and wouldn't have that charm of "Woman singing in the forest" vibe, that's what i was going for.
0:45 I see what you mean by muddy, I had them same FX as the clap/snare, with speakers this problem doesn't appear though as much.
1:00 I'm pretty sure you missed that at the start that it has the same FX. <3
Hope you can follow me on NG so you'll get notifications on the audio portal screen, if that's how it works i think.