Starts off slow, decent melodic feel. Getting into a melody, liked the background pause, then beat introduction. I think this main synth could have a better sound, honestly. Seems really basic, to me. But I like the pause and filter. Sounds cool. The variation of beats are great. I think you have some great melodies here, and with more emotion and better synths you could have something really good.
What program(s) are you using?
4/5
Drop me a review if you can
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/707965?updated=1476401687