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Alternate Dimension

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Author Comments

First song in FL Studio...Would like feedback =D


ok here goes

i like it but it is missing something more accsustics maybe....but missing something.......good tho


not bad. but it feels kinda hip-hopish. but over all very good.

Here's another review. =)

So this is your first one? Well, you have a decent piano melody...I recognize that clap and hihat! I won't take it off your score, since this is the first time you used them, but please, let's see some originality. I can help you find things if you need me to. =)

Your bassline is pretty good, too, though it could use a bit of variation. And then your transition to that pad (which is too high - try lowering it an octave or so) is a bit too quick, so remember that.

Wow, this part's really sounding like a different song entirely now... nice job with that. =D Very different from what your more recent songs.

Gaaahhh, there's that hihat and clap again. I can't stress this enough - if all of your songs are going to be with the same things, you're going to end up getting 0's for Originality all over the place. Work on it! =D

Overall, a pretty good song, especially for your first. It was better than mine, that's for sure. =P

Good Quality, nice and simple

What I'd like to know is if you used Fruity Loops. It sounds like some basic drumkits for it. Anyways, the review.

Though it was mainly comprised of two sounds, it was actually rather pleasant to listen to. It wasn't insanely complicated, which is nice. Overall, it was very good.

Action Based, Alternate Feeling Added

This song was great, had a great beat to it and a great tone to add with. The song was basically giving off different feeling through out the whole song. A great amount of time was used to make this song and the sequence also had great timing. The song had no chorus which was good giving it that fresh sound each second passing by. For a first song on the audio, I am more than suprised to see how well it turned out.

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Credits & Info


3.94 / 5.00

Jan 2, 2007
10:40 PM EST
File Info
2.1 MB
3 min 2 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.