What went wrong?
I found this to have a great job at being eery, because it sounded just like something from "The X-Files". It really seems to hit you hard at first and you do get used to it more. It is still a very dazzling piece because it uses sounds that people seldom use here. I especially liked the gong sound (if that even was a gong). This was not as surreal as some of your other stuff, but it was still very fun to listen to. What it lacked in surrealness it made up for in having a tone that was very authentic to its central creepiness.