this is my favorite song of all time! 'nuff said
This one I think is my favorite.
This song is awesome. I read the story you wrote for it. I beleive it's more like this.
A police officerby the name of Bryan Adams is investigating a kidnapping of a young man. He does not know who this man is, he consideres this a routine matter. The evedince leads him to an old abbandoned iron mill He parks his crusier and walks to the front of the building. He hears a noise behind him. Before he can react he is struck on the back of the head violently and is knocted out.
He awakins and finds himself in a cell of somekind. The walls and celing are covered with rest and in some places looks ready to cave in. All the sudden a panal slides back on the wall, revealing a screen.. A man's face appears on the screen. "Who are you,"The police officer says. The man laughes coldly. "I am calypso. Welcome to the labarinth. Enjoy your stay. You'll never leave alive." He says. "I don't understand," Brian says shakely. "Oh you will, "Calypso says, and the panal slides back over the screen.
Bryan looks around. He notices that there is another cell beside his. He calls to the person in the cell. The person looks up and Bryan is shocked. It is his brother,Sam, who was admited to Seatle Grace Asylum when they were young. Bryan knows he is insane. Sam's eyes light up and he crys" Welcome brother. I never imagined I would verse you." "What do you mean," Bryan asks, scared. "Don't you see what Calypso wants," Sam cries in mirth, "He wants us to kill each other." Then he utters an insane laugh that sends chills down Bryans spine.
"The contest now begins," Calypso announces over a loudspeaker. The contest had begun.
the two brothers are trapped in the labarinth, one of them insane. The sane one runs through the labarinth. Rust covers the walls and celling. He carries in his hand a broken metal pipe, his only weapon. Meanwhile he can hear the voice of his insane brother right behind him. He turns, and comes to a dead end. His insane brother comes around the corner. He takes the pipe and stabs it through his brother's chest, straight into his heart. His brother looks up at him, the maddened twinkle fading at last from his eyes. "Oh brother,"He cries, and falls dead.
The surviving brother wanders through the labarinth, unaware of his surroundings. He is so weak, he had not eaten for days. all of the sudden he is blinded by a harsh glare. He puts his arm in front of his face. This is too much for his weakened body and he collapses. All of the sudden he realizes what that harsh light means. Unaware of his condition, he gets up and runs into the light. He stares into the brightness of day, and falls, dead.
I plan to make a full short story out of this. I will title it THe Metal Visage, after this song.
laugh scared the crap outa me
it's easily worth a nine or ten except that the laugh scared the living crap outa me
this is easily one of the best and most proffessional sounding pieces that i've heard heard on newgrounds...simply stunning
Crazy. how did you get this awesome skill. I myself can't even tie my shoe well, yet you make masterpieces almost daily crazy. Please by all means continue. The only reason i gave it a nine was because the i thought the build-up was a little slow. Other then that awesome. All the istroments (plz excuse bad spelling) fitted the theme. well once again you have proved your self to be newgrounds leader in music. Have a good day now.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.