Good work here, I think you could turn this into a really great song. I love the background synths with the LFO, creates a really nice, vivid texture, and the lead fits perfectly into the mix (and I like the pitch bend, really adds a lot of feeling).
As far as which of the two drum patterns I like better, I think that if you're going to use this as the hook/chorus of a song (which is where I would assume you're going with this) I would use the first pattern the first time the hook plays, and then use the second one the second or third time (depending on how long the song is and how many times you want to replay the hook). The first one fits better with the overall feel of the track, but the second one has more motion to it, it's a simpler rhythm that gets people's heads bobbing.
Either way I recommend switching up your rhythms a little, so that each pattern isn't exactly the same throughout. Try throwing in an extra kick beat after beat 4 of a measure every once in a while, and add some fills every four or eight measures or so. Whatever you want to do to add a little variety.
All in all, a project with a lot of potential. Both beats have their advantages and disadvantages, it's up to you to decide what's more important to you.