Dude. You are gonna need to spend some money on actual music making software.
Because your music could be so much better with it.
as for the actual song.
The kick sounds too short.
And the main instrument volume is too high.
And add some more sounds and instruments.
And as i said before you should get some actual music making software.
Thanks; I'm thinking of buying FL studio now. And I'll take into account what you told me for other songs.
What program do you use for your songs?
I use a free program called LMMS, because I don't want to spend 100 bucks on fruityloops. :l
I only listened to some waterflame's songs... those seemed to have a shift in instruments... which this lacked.............
Now for my own judgement; the main instrument's volume was too high... tone it down a bit. It sounded very plain so I advise you add more instruments to it that supports the two main instruments throughout the song.
Great work thou
Yeah, I was wondering if I should have used more instruments and mixed it up a bit. I'm still trying to get those basics down. I don't know about the pitch...it seemed to be about the same as Waterflame's song...I don't know. Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!
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