-I love that you gave it variation :D There's still the base notes, which is good, and I'm glad that you changed it up :)
-At the beginning you had the base notes going which is good.
-Then around :40 I really started to stop and listen hard.
-Love how you took the notes, and mixed it up with the base.
-It didn't seem too repetitive this time, I liked it. I'm fine with repetitiveness as long as it isn't the --same notes in the same octave, in the same beat throughout the whole song.
-I can't find much wrong with it, listened to it twice, three times.
-It sounds like you put a lot of work into this song. Well done.
4.5/5 stars :)