I think the description you gave this is pretty accurate. Some sweet Daft Punk vibes for sure, I think what this track would benefit most from is some cleanup EQ wise. I found the low mid area to be a bit much and felt that with some tweaking everything could probably come through a lot better.
Dude... this is AWESOME. I wish I could make music like that. Mind telling me what program you used?
Fl studio 9, with various vsts.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.