It's not bad, but It's not good either, so it's badgood! Content is always bad when we start out, but everyone's capable of improvement!
:) I mean, just compare my latest video, with some of my firsts.
I don't make music, so I don't know how to give good suggestions, I guess just have sounds that make sense together, And in some parts of the song, Iv'e noticed that it is very plain, like drums or something could make it sound better, also I noticed that there was no base melody, most songs tend to work off of a melody, and change it up a bit, while still keeping the same sounding tune.
I know you'll make good songs in the future, hope my feedback was somewhat helpful!
-Alexkazam