Well this one was interesting, there is almost a "DROWNING" out sound quality, not sure if thats something you did on purpose or the program used, but it does give it a lil something more, this was notbad though.
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Could be a tad longer and adding other variaty of instraments might put this over the edge.
Yup that sound was actually done entirely on purpose. It's a lofi style of hiphop sound that seems to be popular right now so I thought I'd try it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.