Really like the sound that comes in at 0:38, very dark. The overall mood is very discordant and jarring, but that was probably what you were going for right? Even so, I think some of the sounds clash perhaps too much e.g 02:20, and 2:10, as they kind of send the listener too far "out" of the piece. Other sounds, such as the one immediately following it at 2:30 fits a lot better. Overall, I feel there could be work done to make all the sounds mesh together more nicely, but the bits that do fit really work.
Thanks for the review! I still have the flp, so i will edit the parts you mentioned. I made all my synths monophonic, so that's maybe why.
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