A little too repeditive
Otherwise pretty good
Thank you! Yeah, I know it's a bit repetitive; it's my oldest song on Newgrounds. But I've been working on mixing things up in my other songs. My best songs are Distopia (I spelled it that way on purpose) and Drifters, if you'd like to check them out.
This is pretty good! However, I do have to agree with the other comments, regarding cleaning up the song a little. Otherwise, great work!
Yeah, I know...this is my second song up here, because the other was getting a lot of hate. :( But thanks for your opinion. I really appreciate it!
There are a number of things you can do to make this work, there seems to be some "STATIC-SOUND" so maybe cleaning that up a bit is a start and adding a variaty of different sounds would be a plus aswell.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More mixture of sounds and cleaning it up a tad.
Thanks; yeah, I have particular trouble with mixing up instruments. I'll listen more carefully for static next time...Thanks! I appreciate the review!