The composition is generally good. I think the main Piano is a bit too "big" in the mix or too bassy. It would be nicer on the ears if you cut some of those low-mid frequencies etc. There is no rhythm section so you don't have to have a super thick mix. Apart from that I'd give this 4 stars if the composition had more original sounds or was trying to get somewhere. Still, the main idea is good, it works and would work for game credits.

Now that's more like it, dude!
I love how you extended the song more with "breaks" sprinkled through the song. Like i said before the first melody introduced is EXTREMELY catchy, it's been stuck in my head all day. The song is also a lot more relaxed definitely sounding more like an end credits song. Overall, an amazing job, keep up the great work!

-Bow

heh.
nice job as usual
fantastic epic
charismatic
charming
allot of good stuf baisicaly