Repitition is gonna be your bitch, I know. In the beginning, too much of it. Key changes were pretty good. Try to factor in some good bass as well. Other than that, pretty awesome!
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A completely original techno song by me (DJ CJ Doty) made for Newgrounds. Ends very suddenly for easy looping. Free to download and use for whatever project you may be working on, just remember to send some kudos this way please! Don't forget to also sub my YouTube if you like. :)
*edit*: Completely changed the song! Made the kicks tighter and bass "crunchier" so they stand out more. Also added some bass-end the lead was so desperately needing on every drop. The HUGE difference starts around 1:30 into it, I've added a total dropoff point and slowly introduce the song back in a different/more exciting key.
Of course I still have the original if that's what people prefer. Please bear with me as techno making is completely new to me as far as music making goes, I would love to hear your critique on my edited version so I can fix it. I'm a perfectionist! xD
DJ-Doty responds:
Thanks for the info! I'll keep that in mind. :)
-It's a nice song, but I think it's a bit too repetitive.
-I like the music itself, I just think a little more variety in the looping. Maybe an octave higher or lower here and there, or a muffled sound.
-I normally don't like voices in my music, but the man's voice in your song worked out pretty well.
I do think that this song has a LOT of potential! Just a little polish :) I look forward to your next song!
DJ-Doty responds:
Thanks so much for your help! It's good to hear from you again sciencefreako!
lol, "the man's voice" that was me!! xD
Love it!
DJ-Doty responds:
Thank you! :)
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