I'm not a total fan of the genre, but I can say a very well done job to you! :) Definitely going to listen to more of this style.
i like that low freq, mangled horn sound.
it would sound so much better, in my opinon, if you added some kind of background noise, like a swaying breeze, or maybe something like waves crashing against rocks, or maybe a slight hum from a fridge/microwave, or perhaps pencils scritch scratching on paper, or a ruffled flapping of bird wings.
I agree, it could use a tad bit more in the atmosphere department.
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