Wow! This captured me right from the opening notes and went on to really deliver :) The guitar though wasn't to my taste as it seemed a bit too shrilly and tinny.
Yeah I kind of agree about the guitar there and if I redid it I would have shifted the guitar down an octave. But I really enjoyed making this song and I think it turned out really well, but again nothing is perfect and will take your comment to heart for the next time I do a rock piece.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.