Here's some emo shit, idk.
This started out as me just playing around with piano in FL Studio, and I came up with a little tune that I liked, and after listening to it a few times, I really wanted to write lyrics to it, and so a couple days later I did, and then I combined some parts and then added some wind/rain and this is the result. I like it, but hey, it's everyone else's opinion that matters more. This is pretty close to how the songs I was writing in 2012 would've sounded if I actually knew what I'm doing, so that's something I guess.
LYRICS
Sometimes I hate myself
When I think of how I've felt.
But that's dumb, I should know.
I wish I could let it go.
Sometimes I'll give up
And I don't know what to do.
Those times I'll shut up
And I'll say nothing to you.
But that's bad! Yes, I know.
Sometimes I just can't let it go.
And I know i'll be free,
I one day hope I can stop obsesing, just get better, be a better me.
But for now I'll never know,
'Cause I can't just let it go.
And I don't know what to say,
I guess I'll just try again some other day.
Another great piece
I really like what you do with your tracks and you really bring out some nice style and the lyrics on this one are pretty solid not sure I would ad anything to change this piece it's just a solid piece and stands on it's own very nice piece of work here
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A quality piece like this don't need any changes
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Thanks!
That's that freestyle kind of lyrics, sounds like. :) Maybe a little brainstorming could make some of this to a real song though? Piano sounds surprisingly real, wouldn't think it was in FL if you didn't say it.
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I feel like "freestyle " is a fitting way to describe how I write lyrics, especially since I usually write lyrics before the music, though recently I have been making music first, because it seems easier to get more of a finished product.
I have been considering revisiting this song and making it sound more full, but I kinda like it how it is right now. We'll see though ;3
And yeah, FL studio's piano tends to get a lot of shit, but I think it sounds pretty decent, and I'm pretty sure I didn't modify anything about it here.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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