Okay, remember the time you complained about your inability to rock out? This one proves otherwise. It rocks. It's also an industrial track, and I'm pretty sure you never submitted that stuff before. Even in its current state, someone will use this well in a Flash, be it a game or in a psychological fight scene. However, it's a little repetitive and in its early stages, I'd expect that. It's worth working on.
Originality: 8. Bingo; something different.
Clarity: 8. Not too high, not too low on the register. This one is the true Fortress of Doom.
Diversity: 6. Repetitive, but what's there is freaky and cool. This path seems interesting, and also does not appear to suffer from cheesy synths as you suggest; previous works have nothing on this.
Effort: 8. And thankfully, those points aren't wasted.
Overall: 10. Continue this path. You're improving a lot more than you think. Should have downloaded this sucker before!
Should definatly finish
Even in its unfinished state its good. Looking forward to seeing it finished!
i like and i definetely think u should finish this
keep up the good work
PS. check out my audio and tell me what u think