Okay so si
You made a song with some great progression in it.
Looks like you need to sidechain a little bit, limit, compress, you know.
I'm at the buildup right now though okay annnnd...
1:30: I like the drop here, some mastering and peak control would make this awesome! Maybe layer the lead with one an octave lower?
Good work bud, and keep making music man! (:
3/5 3/5: You will become better as you progress.