Despite being overly dry I'm a sucker for chopping. XD I like the genre feeling of this song. Has some good unique solo aspects that are often missing from compositions on NG's I think.
I think you could benefit hugely from better samples/instruments. The technical side of making music is a huge pain in the butt, but when you compose as well as you do it's worth it for you to get your butt moving on it.
Nice track man!