Nice! Could you make more?

Well this song gets right into it. Consider an intro or a small build up to the loop point we begin at. But already the song has a unique feel, which I like. I feel the beat is a bit dry, but you have a good grasp on rhythm.

The ending could use a little bit something more. Even if it's just an extension of a beat for a few bars.

I like your instrument choices, they have variety and yet fit together. I can't wait to hear your stuff once you level up at mixing and mastering. Cool stuff, I see great potential.

The song writing is pretty good, you have a nice progression, and a good sense of unity in knowing what patterns go well together.

If I were you I'd start learning compression, it'll really boost your track. Start thinking about mastering.

Arrangement is good, structured.

Thanks for posting the track!