You're a young producer who's experimenting. Dude, this type of music is so expansive. Techno is fun, but there are an unbelievable amount of different ways you can make your sound so much better. I read that you are taking a break from techno? Haha, don't let it last forever because you have potential. This, I love the fast paced composition you show. You definitely have composition talent and potential to be a great artist!! (:
The song is 3.5/5 voted 4/5, you need to grasp the concepts of mastering better.