Only positive thing is that it has some neat sound design here and there.
The piano melody is bad. Same goes for that sawlead melody (It's bad). There's also some mixing issues, the track sometimes sounds too empty and sometimes a bit muddy. There was unneccessary white noise at some parts. The violin doesn't really go well together with the rest of the song.
That's pretty much it, I don't think I missed anything. Assuming you aren't a very experienced artist. You gotta spend some time to learn some music theory, which would really help.
I'm sorry, but I'm beginner. I'm also watching and learning from youtube videos in order to improve
I think this song amazing the WHOLE way through!
Thanks for the Rating!try to improve more and more