There a few notes off... but this is why I'm scouting you:

A: You have ambition. You are already making an album, and that's exactly what I did first. I think that improving music quality is very important, but this is a good start.
B: You have improved so much. That is a sign. I'm sure if you keep a good pace then you'll have great work in no time!
C: You've got the skills. I can tell you have a nice foundation of music theory and know what to do when you write a piece.

That's all. Shark Out.