Pretty good. I wasn't expecting there to be sound effects but it really adds to the story.
The last bit seemed a bit longer than necessary.
Author Comments
This is the pilot episode to a podcast im working on. could use some feed back
Qwertfx responds:
That wasn't actually supposed to be there. I think it must have been a rendering mistake in sony vegas. I might upload a fixed version in the near future. also thanks!
Credits & Info
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- 649
- Downloads
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- Score
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- Uploaded
- Aug 24, 2016
- 3:15 AM EDT
- Genre
- Storytelling
- File Info
- Podcast
- 22.1 MB
- 14 min 50 sec
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