Its not bad, I like it. I like how the original is called "Asian Kung-Fu Generation" lol. From the start up to 23 seconds, its just what? A clicking/typing sound effects? Then it jumps right into the song. Where was the build up or at least hype? It just jumps right into the music after 23 seconds. However, 23 seconds isn't that bad of a time frame drag. Had you dragged it for 30 seconds+ It would've made it really pale. I feel this sounds more like you're leaning towards Trance but the fact you keep looping it and the one major note difference towards the end at 3:32 and lasts like 3 seconds. Thats kinda where its like, eh.... Maybe if you used the last note in between parts of the song as a high rise and low drop keeping the beat going instead of looping it. Probably would've kept a good head movement. Overall not bad, I still like it.