Nice

My only suggestion is try to use different samples, or mix two different snares. I try not to use generic snares, but the snare you used here is like my home-dawg, I use it in almost every song I've made. I just realized how generic it sounds...

Anyways, that hi-hat isn't the best sample out there, and when you use snares try and mix two different ones.

Other than that, good.

cool

for your first drumloop, this is really good!
it sounds original, i've never heard snare timing like that. The next thing to do would be to work on adding new sections, and trying different basslines. keep it up!