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This track will be released on the Ocular Sounds youtube channel on October 5, 2016 as of right now

I don't know what genre this is and I don't care, I just wrote a song and that's cool with me.

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Awesome song man!! :D I swear I still recognize that melody from the drop, but whatever xD

RELEASED AS A 360 VIDEO FIRST BEFORE OCULAR!!! https://youtu.be/zc227ytNIhE
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I like the pad in the intro. Nice sounds there! The melodies (especially the theme at the beginning) sometimes have a nearly celtic/irish folk feeling. DonĀ“t know idf this is coincidence or intended but I like it. Also I really like your progressions. The track is well structured and there is a lot of variation going so you never lost my attention here. Mixing and mastering sound good in general. The only thing I have here is, that the stereo image could be widened a bit to give the sounds a bit more room and transparence. Also I think sometimes you could add some details here and there sometimes to fill the musical room a bit. For example: Take the part starting 1:20. You have your drums here, some kind of pulsing in the lower mids and your lead. I think it would add a lot if you would use some chord pads and some bass to fill out the high mids and the bass. Other things I have are just small details. I think the snare could you use during the main theme (and some of the percussion in general) could use some more punch. Maybe layer them with some other snare samples? Add some distortion? If you would work a bit on your drop (more tention in the risers and a small buildup in the drums...) and fill out the part afterwards a bit, as I mentioned before, I guess you could make an awesome track out of this already nice piece! I hope this was helpful in some way, although I come from a completely different musical corner ;)

Drewpy responds:

Thanks man! It's always great to hear what you can do to improve a track, and that's what you told me here. I appreciate it a lot :)

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Drewpy
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Uploaded
Aug 18, 2016
11:36 PM EDT
Genre
Dance
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5.9 MB
4 min 19 sec

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