Really like that first part, but it's a little weird. The melody was pretty good; but it's frequency might need to be changed a bit. I also like how it transitions to that guitar solo: but the drums don't fit at all. They definitely could've went more with the melody: Other than that couldn't find anything else wrong. Good job.
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