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Sometimes you feel the presure, holding you down so strongly that the only option that seems to work is to cry out for help...
PS: Im not depressed i just love sad songs and my main inspiration is radiohead..
PS2: Yup...the image on this song is strangely my face, why? No reason.
PS3: Take it off IS NOT a sexual reference.

Lyrics:
The pressure
Building inside me
Eating energy
Coliding with me
It can, not win
I must, Stay strong
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BRIDGE
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And i must forget everything
Ignore everyone
Isolated ill stay
In this chilly place alone
until someone...maybe you
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CHORUS
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So, take it off
Because i cant stand it
It keeps crushing me
I have no air left on my lungs....to breath
So save me please
Save...oh save

SOLO
BRIDGE
CHORUSx2

Good luck in the competition guys :)

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I like the soulful, slow-paced guitar line. I think there isn’t a ton of power behind your vocals, though, which made the climactic sections of this piece feel a little less climactic. For example, “save” at 1:43 should probably carry through into the downbeat of the next measure in order to maximize the intensity at the chorus. Little details like that would really give this piece a little more punch and emotion. The mixing and mastering are solid, though, and the solo at 2:12 is really well done. I like the lyrics, and this piece is well-structured and smooth-flowing. From what I’ve heard of your other work, it seems that this piece is very much in your comfort zone. In future rounds, I’d love to see you experiment more with other genres, themes, and moods, but for now this is more than enough for you to advance. Keep up the good work, DivoFST! :)

9.25/10

DivoFST responds:

Thank you so much!!! You are always "that judge" that gives me amazing scores xD
I might try an adventure in a diferent genre for the next round ^^
Your love is much apreciated!

This is one of the nicest songs i've heard today..!
Keep writing more songs (and sorry for my bad english haha)
Please check my profile, I've only submited two songs by now, hope you like it

DivoFST responds:

Thanks, just checked them!

Nice Song!!! Very emotional, I like it!

DivoFST responds:

Thanks buddy!! :D

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DivoFST
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Uploaded
Jul 29, 2016
12:21 PM EDT
Genre
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8.9 MB
4 min 46 sec
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