Heh, not bad, man! This feels a little lacking and raw without the vocal harmony and layers. Your singing voice needs more practice, too. Your voice very nearly went weak at a few points of this, where you had to go higher, but you got through the higher points of the song vocally very well!
Hell, I had no idea you actually sang, so this was cool to listen to! Not bad, dude!
Yup, I sing! :) I really appreciate that critique too!
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