Wow. This is really good.
I'm loving those piano flourishes you sprinkled throughout. I also really like those... violin? Violin-ish thing?... solos melodically— they're super interesting.
As AeronMusic said, there was some clipping, but I know how hard it is to master songs made on Apple products loudly, so no huge deduction there. I also wish you had changed up the chord progression in more than one place, but that's sort of personal taste, so whatever.
Anyway, keep it up! Can't wait to hear more originals from you.
I'd prefer the sub bass in mono, it would sound much better since it is taking a lot of space in the mix and is distracting. Also your mix is clipping, probably because it is mastered somewhat loud.
I like the sounds though. Melodic wise it is pretty cool and I love the beat.
Keep it up man.
Thanks for the tips!
the beginning is a little loud and can take you by surprise if you have your volume all the way up (like i did), but other than that great work!
(also i was the first review (8 )