good shit (fml i have no idea what to write x'D) the leads pretty cool
Definitely sounds like something you would hear in a video game XD I have a few things though:
The bass doesn't seem to fit well with the lead, you can really tell the difference between the two.
The snare sounds like something you would use in a dubstep song, not in the fast, upbeat songs,
I really liked 0:48, but the slurs here and there don't seem to fit, and are kinda random, if you remove those, I think I would have enjoyed that part a lot better,
I really like the harmony at 1:36, fits very well with the song, aaaaannnnndd
the last thing is that after about 2 minutes or so, the song starts to get a little repetitive. If you ended the song earlier or added a new melody or lead, it would have been great :D
Overall, I really think you have great potential, it was a very fun and catchy song.
I really hoped you learned a thing or two from me :D
Thank you for your detailed review :D I'll definitely take everything you've said into consideration in the future. I'm not very well experienced with fitting basses and leads together, and I need to work on ironing out my repetition. I'm glad to hear exactly what I need to improve in my work from someone else, and I hope that, with this constructive advice, I can improve to a tolerable level.
Thanks again for the helpful advice :D