Great song! Almost feels like DimRain47 in a way. Can't necessarily say to add subbass because I'm listening from a phone (which doesn't pick up bass very well). Anyways, great job!
So this is your first song? Nice! I like it, but it could use some improvement.
First let's start with the beginning, the arpeggio is great, I think I the percussion could come in a bit later, but knowing that you made this for geometry dash I won't judge that issue. The melody is pretty good, although the decline in pitch at the end of the melody could be changed. Through the entirety of the song I felt like something was missing, I soon realized that the something was a bassline. I recommend adding a subbass in your future projectsthat
Thanks for the review! Well, I didn't make this specifically for Geometry Dash, but you're right, the start is too short. I know that the pitch decline at the end of the melody isn't good at all, but I didn't know how to polish more the main melody for that part. I ussed a subbass during all the song but it isn't well mastered, I will try to improve that for next projects :)
Thank you again and sorry for bad english
A very great start for a beginner! Honestly this piece is amazing! The change from retro to the beautiful piano is what really got me hooked! Hope to see more in the future! :)
Thanks for your support!
Me gusta mucho!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.