So...you're saying this was a track you started before the contest? Well....thats against the rules....sigh.....it's a real shame, because this is a great piece, but you're supposed to start from scratch for the contest. Sorry dude :( just a rule to make things fair for everyone.
I'll still review this though. The atmosphere is really appropriate for the picture, brings it to life. It's a bit simplistic but reminds me of simpler times in the gaming community. My only real complaint is that this song is mostly sound over melody, needs to be playing more, more often. It's really repetitive with the melody. Could have used more in that department. But the sound work, the glitchy effect to it, and the atmosphere, is really great.
I really wish this could be in the competition, but i guess you didn't go over all the rules :( and I feel bad i've had to do this in past years too because I want to make things fair for everyone to start at the same time. But still good job on this piece and I'm glad you made it.