it sounded nice but a little random for my tastes
and your songs are rated quite unfairly maybe it's just cuz you're new
I really liked this one! Reminds me of infomercials with just music and no voice, like for a random thing that says come to australia or sumthin XD.
Ill give it a 5/5, cuz I like the structure, now all u need is pads and shit =)