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RR - Exhale

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Breath In and Out, and don't for get to Exhale. Rate n Review

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Hmm

God, I´ve had no time reviewing your stuff because of the XBrav site and the last song, so I guess I´ll take a little break and eat some of your tracks.

I can say you haven´t done much with the style.
You have some nice melodies and trippy beats... but COME ON, you can do better than this!

You use the same instruments over and over! You should try having a lot of instruments or at least find new and original ways to play different synths!

I think I must have heard the short sawtooth probably in half of your songs, and it isn´t any especially interesting instrument either!

The melodies you have make no different out from the others either, they are all the same style, kinda bland, short and repetative, and it isn´t really a good evolution.

Do you spend time on your drums? Well, I´m not found of making drum loops, so I guess I´m not the one to talk, but if you´re gonna have drums make them at least a little bit diverse!

The good point with your songs are that they have trippy beats and combinations of melodies that fits well, included the intruments you have.

But it´s just not enough.

I would like to see something that´s not this repetative and such...

I consider this as an overview review for the main part of your last songs, since they are all so damn alike sounding.

DJRaveR responds:

I'm not trying to make a song that is boring, dull and repeatitve (in the way you think) but I'm trying to make a song like the popular bands do. And to do that I've notice they use most of the same saws, same this and same, and well I'm trying to replicate those sounds. Also I don't have time to do play around because I got other things to do.

I've been trying to make up new sounds and beats but they all just end up the same.

very amateur

but everyone starts somewhere

That being said, it progressed pretty nicely, but the snares should have been on every other kcik beat. One of your synths needed its attack adjusted and its volume turned down. It ended very abruptly.

Keep working at it, youll improove

video gamish

i dont think this should b under techno it sounds more like a video game but good work any way keep it up
PS. go check out my audio

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Uploaded
Dec 19, 2006
9:57 AM EST
Genre
Techno
File Info
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1.5 MB
1 min 39 sec

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