I really like the work you put into that lead. The lick at 0:37 and pretty much everything between 0:50 - 1:00. You got effing everything you could get out of a square-saw instrument.

That's a blue waffle, isn't it...

1. i could hear all freq's with my headphones
2. the pattern you used for your synth melody is definitely chaotic (except from 01:00-01:33)
3. even though i could hear all freq's, the kick drum you have drowns out the low freq's from the synth you used at about 01:46
4. overall though, the song is KISS (Keep It Stupid simple) which is great. The key signature matches. the bass, alto, tenor, and saprano is fine, but you just need to keep an eye on the frequencies that are going on through the track then mix it well. keep it up :D

Cool! I'd suggest some adjustment on the first synth, as the melody is pretty unclear.

In fact, most of the song is pretty chaotic and irrational, which is good in some cases, but in this song it doesn't really fit.

Also, there are some mixing issues, but they're pretty minimal at most points.

at 1:39 specifically, you can't really hear the synth at its lower frequencies very well, but idk what could fix that, aside from a higher pitch.

The only other criticism I have is it needs some atmospheric background, as it's pretty empty and unbalanced.

What VSTs do you currently have access to?

(sorry if this is super overwhelming)

cool!