Worm-Hole (Attack!) [Fixed]

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My internet crashed rite as i submited the other 1, and you have to dload to listen, fixed

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good ^^

man i like this song, there is something nice about out it. anyway i like it ( on a sunday morning, and that is a miracle )

CjienX responds:

haha thanks :P, yeah sunday mornings are a pain.

Hey! =)

Thanks again for the review, I can't wait to see what your song's like. But... you haven't submitted in a while! =( Go ahead and PM me next time you do.

You start with your percussion which COULD be good... but if you want to try that, it had better be catchy and professional-sounding on its own like it sounds with the melody and harmonies.

Your melody is good, and it seems like a bit of effort went into it. It's catchy and you have some nice rhythms... I'd like to see how it would have worked had you played with them for some awesome moments in the song. You could have chosen a better synth for it, and I feel the chords weren't necessary.

Woah, what's that panning? It wasn't quite pleasant to listen to and shouldn't have been there, in my opinion.

Harmonies are good though I'm hearing clashing notes left and right. Try to work on that, if you had fixed those the quality (which I feel these bring down) would be better AND the song would sound awesome! ;) Keep trying there, you'd be good at this if you put a bit more effort here. I like how you end with a harmony of yours, though it feels a bit sudden.

Percussion is nice, and you have some very creative rhythms here. I wouldn't have started with it, though. Your drums are well-chosen and add some nice feeling to the song. No quality problems here, either.

Your atmosphere is nice, and I could see this in a game. Very nice sound to this song, though I think you could have built on it a bit more with variation in your melodies, sections to the song, etc. This song could potentially have very nice moments in it, but it needs some work.

Nice job, overall. You get a 4 from me. =) I hope to hear from you later when you submit a song... but unfortunately I'll probably forget to check your audio page, so if you want that review you'd better send me a PM! =) Keep up the good work.

CjienX responds:

Wow incredible reviews and incredible songs! you can do it all XD. i noticed all the points that you made about this song.. its not really one of my favorites.. if you want to hear one of my favorites tho listen to <[[Funky]]> Into the Beat, which is my newest, and my best older one is In The Clouds [Legend] thanks for the review tho man! and im going to PM you about <[[Funky]]> Into The Beat, so you can check it out like you asked :)!


The opining sounds like PX9!!!

-SpeedyDolphin(ReindeerDolphin now,I think you know why;) )

CjienX responds:

ty ^^


This track is drum and bass, not techno.

That aside- it is still a very cool sounding song.
People seem to give garageband shit because it is just about throwing loops together- but so what, if you can use it to make cool music- great!

CjienX responds:

ya well i wasn't sure what it was at the time, and techno is a pretty general genre.

garageband isn't just about putting loops together, on my old song thats all i did, but alot of hte loops in this song were mine except 1 snyth and a couple drum fills.

anyway ty for the comment.


yup this one works! i loved it it fit together perfect, to bad you had to submit it twice, and ya i had to d-load the other one to listen to it.

CjienX responds:

lol we both have X's at the end of our names XD. thanks for the comment, and that did suck really bad when i had to upload twice >.<

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Dec 18, 2006
10:13 PM EST
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2.2 MB
1 min 36 sec

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