Well everything about this so seemed so "experimental," which in this case just was all over the place. Around 2 mins it goes tropical which does not go well with the rest of the song. Definitely not the worst song but not the best, keep it up :)
Yeah haha, I definitely am not proud of this. This was pretty much my first 'real' song, but I have better stuff coming. :)
You really need to master this better, besides that, it's ok.