You have to EQ this more. Hard to tell what is going on or what I am suppose to listen for.
Some parts gets boring, but thats a personal opinion.
The overuse of the phaser on your sequencer is a bit too much.
I also recommend getting different drum packs. These are quite stale.
Cool melodies tho.
Fair enough. This was the first song I ever wrote on my computer, started and finished for a total of like 3 hours, using only the keyboard as a piano, and it was on garage band. This was before I even touched settings on instruments. At least you thought the melodies were cool because that's all I was focused on.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.